I recently received a newsletter from a real estate company. Do you see anything incorrect with the wording?
I and my team at
XXX in XXXX want to welcome the XXX family into our
community
Can't find it? This line should read "My team and I..."
When you use poor grammar, it is a reflection upon you and your company.
MARKETING TIP: Have someone eyeball your communication before you send it out. Make sure it is correct. Your income can depend upon it. Look at it this way. If you cannot write something correct for yourself, are you going to do it correctly for your client?
Tuesday, June 12, 2018
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